Nail My Elevator Pitch
Someone asks what you do and you ramble. Describe it — get a pitch so clear they get it in one breath and want to hear more.
The elevator pitch that makes people lean in instead of nod politely.
Help me build a 60-second pitch. What I'm pitching: [IDEA / PRODUCT / MYSELF] To whom: [investor / customer / employer / partner] The outcome I want: [meeting / buy-in / interest] Give me a pitch that: opens with a hook (a problem they feel or a surprising line), says clearly what it is and who it's for, makes the value obvious fast, includes the one proof point that builds belief, and ends with a specific ask. No jargon, no rambling. Then give me a 10-second version for when that's all I get. Tell me the one word or phrase to cut because it weakens it. End with the full 60-second script.