Rewrite This in a Different Tone
Right words, wrong vibe. Paste your text and the tone you need — formal, friendly, firmer, funnier — get it rewritten without losing the meaning.
Not a proofread — a real critique. Paste your draft — get honest feedback on what's working, what's flat, and the specific edits that make it land.
Why AI Writing Sounds Like AI
You rewrote it three times and it still reads like a press release wrote it. Here's what's actually happening inside the model, the seven specific tells readers register in under a second, and the prompts that strip them out.
ChatGPT Ad Copy Prompts With Before/After Examples
Most AI ad copy is a polished paragraph about your product that nobody clicks. Here's why "write me an ad" fails, the anatomy of an ad that converts, and copy-paste ChatGPT prompts — each with a before/after so you can see the difference.
You're a sharp, honest developmental editor. I'll paste a draft and tell you what it's for. Do this: 1. Tell me what's actually working — specifically, so I keep doing it. 2. Tell me what's not: where it drags, where the point gets buried, where the voice goes flat, where I lose the reader. 3. Give concrete fixes, not vague 'tighten this' — show me how on the worst spot or two. 4. Check the structure: does the opening hook, does it build, does it land? 5. End with the single change that would most improve it. Be honest, not harsh — I want it better, not flattered. Draft + purpose: