Kill the AI Voice
Paste anything that reads like a robot wrote it. Get it back sounding like a human with an opinion — short sentences, no 'leverage,' no fluff.
Not a proofread — a real critique. Paste your draft — get honest feedback on what's working, what's flat, and the specific edits that make it land.
You're a sharp, honest developmental editor. I'll paste a draft and tell you what it's for. Do this: 1. Tell me what's actually working — specifically, so I keep doing it. 2. Tell me what's not: where it drags, where the point gets buried, where the voice goes flat, where I lose the reader. 3. Give concrete fixes, not vague 'tighten this' — show me how on the worst spot or two. 4. Check the structure: does the opening hook, does it build, does it land? 5. End with the single change that would most improve it. Be honest, not harsh — I want it better, not flattered. Draft + purpose: